Friday, June 14, 2013

Not edited yet, but I'm so excited that I had to post it... - Lace

Guess who decided to cooperate tonight? ^_^

Chapter 1

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                My brother told me that he barely had to pay anything to get his video made for the selection committee. It’s taken me a while to track down his videographer, someone named Charnus Greeley, but now that I have I’m convinced that his price for filming has definitely gone up. Thank goodness I’ve been working three jobs and can survive on six hours of sleep every night, otherwise I wouldn’t have had any hope of getting chosen to move up.
                Something tells me this videographer is the reason Cy got picked to move up. It’s not that he wasn’t intelligent, charismatic, and talented—he was. It was just, I know a couple other people who meet the above criteria as well as Cy did, and they weren’t picked. So it had to have been Charnus Greeley, whoever he is, who was responsible for my brother’s becoming a Primus. And if I want to be one too, I guess I need his help. That’s why I’m on my way to hire him.
                I have to make a video that tells the selection committee all about me. My full name, my desired future career as a Primus or Secundus, and, above all, why they should pick me. If I have family members who’ve been moved up, what my special talents are, that sort of thing. All the people I’ve talked to—my teacher from the elementary school who stayed in touch with me being the most influential by far—tell me that my videographer will help me plan out what’s best to tell them.
                I squeeze the brake on my motorcycle hard, sending it skidding to a stop. The rubber wheels whine on the pavement and I wince, but it’s more fun, more dangerous, to stop it that way. Cy used to tell me that my daredevil nature was either going to pay off big time or get me hurt. So far it’s done neither. But to be chosen for the career I want—the career Cy was picked for—I need to be a daredevil. It’s in the job description.
                The building I’ve stopped in front of is one of the biggest in all of East. It looks solid, like it’s been there for hundreds of years. It probably has. There are several doors along its base, labeled with faded wooden signs for the most part. All except one. The one that catches my eye is almost new compared to the others, its paint only a couple of years old as opposed to what looks like decades. It reads “Charnus Greeley” in red block letters.
                Swallowing, I raise my hand and knock on the metal door. There’s a button beside it which supposedly was called a “doorbell” and which you could press to get the inhabitant of the apartment to come to the door. Whatever made it work ceased to function long ago, however, and so now all of us in the Tertius Quarter of East have to knock to alert friends and fellow workers to the fact that we’ve arrived.
                As I consider this, the door swings open, and a boy about a year older than me appears. He stands there silently, a lock of red hair drooping over one of his eyes, which are an almost bizarrely startling green. He’s about eight inches taller than me, and doesn’t smile.
                “Er…hello,” I say rather awkwardly. “I’m…uh…here to see Charnus Greeley, the videographer?”
                The boy nods and steps aside so I can enter. I wonder if he’s Charnus’ son or something as I cross the threshold and take a look around. The hall within is clean and unfurnished, lit by a series of candle-like lamps nailed to the left wall. The lamps cast interesting shadows over the ceiling and floor, making my shadow waver, growing taller and shorter.
                Clearing his throat, the boy steps forward and heads down the hallway, clearly expecting me to follow. I do so, pondering why on earth he hasn’t said a word. Politeness would dictate he at least tell me his name. I hope Charnus is more polite than his son or whoever this is. Maybe this is just an employee—but if it is, he’s not making a very good impression. Maybe Charnus Greeley isn’t the reason Cy got chosen at all.
                He leads me into a small room furnished with a white backdrop that looks like a sheet, a rickety wooden chair, and a single camera. Large lights, the first sign of electricity in the building I’ve seen, are pointed at the sheet and shining almost blindingly. Upon closer examination, I see an old, almost prehistoric computer sitting on a table that obviously matches the chair. Apparently the magic of Charnus Greeley isn’t his filming location or technology.
                When the boy heads to the camera and turns it on, I raise my eyebrows. “Uh…isn’t Charnus Greeley going to be the one filming? I’m…er…paying a lot of money for this, and I really want it to be as good as possible.
                The boy looks at me evenly, his hair still in his face and his eyes, oddly enough, betraying a hint of amusement. “I’m Charnus Greeley.”
                Embarrassment floods through me, and I can feel my face growing red. “Oh.” I cough uncomfortably. “Sorry. I just didn’t expect you to…be so young, I guess. I’m not trying to offend you,” I add quickly, raising my hands in a defensive posture.
                This just makes him chuckle. “Sit down. I get that a lot, and actually I don’t mind. I like keeping the element of surprise on my side. Someday the Gov is going to know what they missed out on.”
                “What do you mean?”
                He inspects the camera more closely as he explains. “I applied last year. Wanted to be a cinematographer for those movies the Gov sponsors. Apparently ‘they didn’t need any of those this year, thank you,’” he says in a slightly mocking voice, cleaning a fingerprint off of the lens. “Oh, well. Their loss. I guess this is my life now.”
                “Have you filmed for anyone besides my brother Cy and yourself?”
                “Oh, I didn’t film myself. Hired one of my competitors, actually, as per the rules of Selection.”
                “That’s a rule?” I ask, suddenly curious.
                “Yup.” He looks at me oddly. “Surprised you don’t know that.”
                “I wouldn’t have. I’ve never touched a computer in my life, let alone seen a filming camera. Just those Government security ones.”
                He nods. “Most people haven’t. I got lucky; my dad used to film Selection videos before he died, so I inherited all this stuff.” He shrugs, though I see a bit of emotion flicker through his face. “He taught me a few things. The rest I had to learn alone. And in answer to the other part of your question,  filmed a few people aside from your brother.” He shrugs. “They’ve all made it through, which is why I felt comfortable raising my rate a bit.”
                “How do you do it?” I ask. As far as I know, he’s the only person who films the videos who has a perfect record to ever exist. I can only hope he’s telling the truth.
                “It’s a matter of getting to know the person you’re taping. Talk to them a bit before you actually start the mandatory Selection interview. Sit down,” he says again, and I realized that I’m still standing next to the chair. I do as he asks, and he pulls an ancient-looking rolling chair from behind the computer table and sits behind the camera. “So. Tell me about yourself.”
                “Well,” I reply, “My name’s Rainey Kleeft, and if you hadn’t already guessed based on the fact that I’m filming a Selection video, I’m seventeen.”
                He nods. “And your family?”
                “Well, my parents both did odd mechanical jobs and upkeep stuff for the city. They died in a fire when I was seven. My brother Cy basically raised me until I was fourteen. He was three years older than me.”
                “Why are you referring to Cy in the past tense? He was Selected, right?”
                I nod slowly, not wanting to think about it. “Yeah. He was. But he died about six months later.”
                Seeming to sense my hesitation, Charnus moves on. “What do you do for a living?”
                “I work three jobs. I’m junior gardener for the East Greenhouse, I stock shelves at the East Mart, and I drive a street sweeper.”
                He looks mildly surprised. “So you can drive?”
                “Oh, yeah. Cy fixed up an old motorcycle and rigged it to run on an electric charge. It doesn’t go too far, but it gets me to my jobs and recharges in about six hours. It’s pretty fun to ride, even if he did say I was going to wreck it.” I laugh sadly at the memory. Cy saw me doing my signature skid-stop when I was about ten, and though he looked a bit amused, he sat me down right there on the front steps of our apartment and told me that it was dangerous, and please to avoid doing it so I wouldn’t hurt myself. He looked so concerned that I did indeed stop—at least, when Cy was around. I hated to see him look worried. He was such a wonderful older brother…
                Charnus’ voice jolts me out of my reverie. “And how were your school grades?”
                I think back. “They were good, if I remember right. It was a long time ago, of course…but I’m pretty sure they were A’s.”
                “Good. And what were your Talent Test results?”
                I think back. When elementary school students are ready to leave school, which for Tertii happens at the age of eleven, they take a Talent Test that helps potential future employers know what they’re best at, and what they’re not so good at. It’s been a long time since I’ve considered my results, but I remember them clear as day. “In strengths, I got Intelligent, Courageous, and Diligent. In weaknesses, I got Risk-Taker and Stubborn.”
                He nods. “And what Selection career do you want?”
                This is it. I really can’t debate any more. For two and a half years, I’ve wondered whether or not I should go through with the crazy plan I formed. I want answers to some unanswered questions, but the way to get them is so insanely dangerous that I’m not sure whether or not I should do it... A small voice inside me informs me that this is the Intelligent and Risk-Taker sides of myself in a friendly debate. I need to pick, and from the way Charnus is raising his eyebrows, I know I need to make it fast. And of course, the Risk-Taker side wins out.
                “I want to be a pilot.”

                He nods, though his face has gone slightly pale. Standing, he inspects the camera button. “Thanks, Rainey. That concludes the interview,” he says, pressing a button on the camera. A red light beside the lens blinks off, and I realize what he’s done, and applaud the brilliance of it while at the same time find myself irritated at the trickery. He got me to say things without being stressed and nervous. My interview video will be completely natural. They’ll see the real me. Because he was filming that whole time.

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